Your conceptual standpoint is very strong. Symmetry and illusion appear to be important reoccurring themes in the Capital Hill Residence.
Compositions were not posted on your blog. The composition of your montage is unattractive and poorly executed. It does not successfully communicate your themes.
The paper folded models don’t seem to be based on a particular set of photographs or media? The digital model is too literal. These ideas could have been expressed more subtly with a much simpler model. The rendering and use of textures in your model is unattractive. No post editing techniques were employed.
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ReplyDeleteYour conceptual standpoint is very strong. Symmetry and illusion appear to be important reoccurring themes in the Capital Hill Residence.
Compositions were not posted on your blog. The composition of your montage is unattractive and poorly executed. It does not successfully communicate your themes.
The paper folded models don’t seem to be based on a particular set of photographs or media? The digital model is too literal. These ideas could have been expressed more subtly with a much simpler model. The rendering and use of textures in your model is unattractive. No post editing techniques were employed.